I remember you
in the new light of the day
as I stand alone
at the edge of things
far from the door to your heart
and I notice life
fading in its time
here near the rim of lost love -
you lying in dawn's
glow not yet knowing
that I have lifted love's mark
on the moon, on you.
August 14, 2010 2:31 PM
Modified August 10, 2013
There's a feeling of sadness here for both of them. I love the "rim of lost love" and "love's mark on the moon". It's a lovely poem, Christopher, thank you. I've enjoyed reading it.
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